Books like Death of a Darklord

I have three issues with this book:1 - It's choppy. The story jumps and jerks along and nothing is ever finished or explained. The writing is short sentences and abrupt dialog.2 - An over use of characters that know something the reader doesn't. All the way thru you see lines like "I have a theory" or "I might know" but there's no explanation and since the reader doesn't know every experience of the character (this being the first book) we can't come up with our own theory. Personally, I hate that in a story.3 - The ending. There isn't one. The story just stops and moves to a followup from something in the very beginning of the book. If there's going to be a second in the series, do some setup! Give us some minimal resolution, at least!