Books like The Book of Obeah

This was an okay book. The plot was interesting to a point but then all these crazy coincidences started happening. But then I reminded myself that it's a paranormal book, so crazy stuff does happen. I felt there were too many characters, some extraneous, some just popping up at the last minute. The heroine, Melody, said that she felt like she was in a movie with too many characters. I felt exactly the same way!! Finally, there were typos, misspellings, grammatical errors, etc. But not as many as in the author's other book I recently read, "Killer in Sight: A Tom Lackey Mystery".